Talk:Toxoplasma gondii and Schizophrenia

I loved your topic! I've never heard about Toxoplasma gondii in the context of Schizophrenia. You did a really great job of pulling the reader in and keeping them interested throughout by making sure to include biological significance. The only thing I would work on is breaking up your sentences. Sometimes you have really lengthy or complicated sentences that would be more accessible and easier to understand if they were broken up a little more. Otherwise, great job!! -Lillian Spetrino

Overall I think you did a great job exploring this topic. Your explanation of the methods of transfers as well as the life cycle was very interesting. The main thing I would work on is flow and sentence structure. Some of your sentences were confusing or wordy (for example the first sentence in your introduction could be reworded to say what you are trying to say more clearly) but a small amount of tweaking will definitely fix this! Your topic was very interesting, good work!-Kate Lang