Talk:A novel strain of avian origin influenza A (H7N9): Difference between revisions
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Very interesting page, Jack! I enjoyed reading about a topic that oftentimes receives a breadth of coverage instead of depth of detail in media. Your page had clear organizational progression, which made it easy to read. I found the statement about possible intermediate hosts (Liu et al) under the "Origins" section intriguing. It would be interesting to study viral evolution relating to host organisms. The only changes I would suggest are a few technical changes, one example at the very end of the section "Avian flu comparison" is the cutoff citation. For citations of complete articles at the end of the page, I would recommend using initials for author names after the last name and excluding the first author. Overall nice work! --Liz Eder | Very interesting page, Jack! I enjoyed reading about a topic that oftentimes receives a breadth of coverage instead of depth of detail in media. Your page had clear organizational progression, which made it easy to read. I found the statement about possible intermediate hosts (Liu et al) under the "Origins" section intriguing. It would be interesting to study viral evolution relating to host organisms. The only changes I would suggest are a few technical changes, one example at the very end of the section "Avian flu comparison" is the cutoff citation. For citations of complete articles at the end of the page, I would recommend using initials for author names after the last name and excluding the first author. Overall nice work! --Liz Eder | ||
-> Hyperlinking citations in the page to the references section OR to the sources themselves might be useful. | |||
-> I like the images you've chosen. They all seem to add a lot to your page, and they're incorporated very well. | |||
-> Do you have a source for the "Conclusions and future impacts" section? If so, go ahead and add an in-text citation. If not, and this is something you developed on your own, disregard this suggestion! | |||
-> In "Detection and treatment" section, you cite the wiki as a source. If it's available, include a bit more detail in your in-text citation. | |||
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Very interesting page, Jack! I enjoyed reading about a topic that oftentimes receives a breadth of coverage instead of depth of detail in media. Your page had clear organizational progression, which made it easy to read. I found the statement about possible intermediate hosts (Liu et al) under the "Origins" section intriguing. It would be interesting to study viral evolution relating to host organisms. The only changes I would suggest are a few technical changes, one example at the very end of the section "Avian flu comparison" is the cutoff citation. For citations of complete articles at the end of the page, I would recommend using initials for author names after the last name and excluding the first author. Overall nice work! --Liz Eder
-> Hyperlinking citations in the page to the references section OR to the sources themselves might be useful.
-> I like the images you've chosen. They all seem to add a lot to your page, and they're incorporated very well.
-> Do you have a source for the "Conclusions and future impacts" section? If so, go ahead and add an in-text citation. If not, and this is something you developed on your own, disregard this suggestion!
-> In "Detection and treatment" section, you cite the wiki as a source. If it's available, include a bit more detail in your in-text citation.
Comments by: A. Pearlman
