Talk:Borrelia burgdorferi and Lyme Disease

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Overall the paper was clearly presented, well written, and held the attention of the reader. I thought the introduction was very clear and concise; it set up the paper well and laid out all of its contents. The background information was extremely helpful when reading the later sections describing the adhesion mechanisms and transmission from the tick to the host. I think it could have been beneficial to have a couple other figures to accompany the text about the adhesion mechanisms, although the figure located next to the section “transmission from tick to host” was all encompassing. Your references should still be linked. But very interesting topic and great paper! -Rebecca