Talk:Chloroquine Resistance in Plasmodium falciparum

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I found your wiki page very interesting and well written. There are a couple parts that you might want to look over, though. There are a couple times that the parasite's name is not italicized where I think it should be. Also, Some sentences seem repetitive. For example, the section "Development of Chloroquine Resistance in Plasmodium falciparum" sounds like you are saying the same things just in a different way. One thing that you could do to avoid this would possibly combine that section and "Mechanism of Chloroquine Resistance". That might clean things up a little bit. Another thing that might help your page flow better is to move the "Prevalence of Malaria in the World" section to below your introduction. This section is general information that I think would flow in nicely after your introduction.

Overall I think your page is very good. I think the figures you use are great and easy to understand which helps the reader more fully grasp the concept you are talking about. Good work! -Alec McQuiston

I really like the flow of the page and how you explain the drug, the parasite, and the illness. There seems to be a few places where you are a bot redundant. You might want to try cutting down on the wordiness to make it a little bit easier to read. I had never heard of this drug so the page was very interesting and I believe you covered all the important points well. You might want to add a bit more to the figure legends so the readers really understand what they are looking at, besides that nice job! -David T