Talk:Escherichia coli O157:H7 and Hemolytic uremic syndrome: Difference between revisions

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You have a lot of great information on E. coli O157:H7! I have never heard of Hemolytic uremic syndrome so this topic was very interesting.  Just like Pearlman said, are a few bugs in you page aesthetically.  In  the first section you should capitalize the Nestle Toll House since it is the name of a company.  In the second section you have a random paragraph about anthrax.  Also you use acronyms like Gb3 without saying what they stand for.  You should define what it is then put the acronym in parenthesis so the reader understands what it refers to. In the acid resistance section, once you define AR you don't need to keep using parenthesis. I did enjoy reading your page and learned some fascinating mechanisms of adhesion.
You have a lot of great information on E. coli O157:H7! I have never heard of Hemolytic uremic syndrome so this topic was very interesting.  Just like Pearlman said, are a few bugs in you page aesthetically.  In  the first section you should capitalize the Nestle Toll House since it is the name of a company.  In the second section you have a random paragraph about anthrax.  Also you use acronyms like Gb3 without saying what they stand for.  You should define what it is then put the acronym in parenthesis so the reader understands what it refers to. In the acid resistance section, once you define AR you don't need to keep using parenthesis. I did enjoy reading your page and learned some fascinating mechanisms of adhesion.
J. Wehner

Latest revision as of 20:39, 2 May 2014

-> The image code at the top of the page should probably be hidden so it functions properly

-> A few remnants of the original template are present at the top of the page, so deleting those would help!

-> Introduction should have a citation

-> Visible code at beginning of second paragraph of second section (looks like " < p > ") should be removed.

-> Some of your sources aren't hyperlinked, so that would be helpful to add (Besser et al, 2012 in the 3rd section, several sources in the 2nd section, etc). The citations are present but don't link to the references.

-> Consider adding a picture of E. Coli itself in the section where you describe its physical characteristics.

-> Size/format of section headings varies a bit, so it might help streamline your page if you make them similar in font size.

-> Nice job overall! You have absolutely tons of references, and you make great use of them!

Comments by: A. Pearlman


You have a lot of great information on E. coli O157:H7! I have never heard of Hemolytic uremic syndrome so this topic was very interesting. Just like Pearlman said, are a few bugs in you page aesthetically. In the first section you should capitalize the Nestle Toll House since it is the name of a company. In the second section you have a random paragraph about anthrax. Also you use acronyms like Gb3 without saying what they stand for. You should define what it is then put the acronym in parenthesis so the reader understands what it refers to. In the acid resistance section, once you define AR you don't need to keep using parenthesis. I did enjoy reading your page and learned some fascinating mechanisms of adhesion.

J. Wehner