Talk:Escherichia coli O157:H7 and Hemolytic uremic syndrome

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-> The image code at the top of the page should probably be hidden so it functions properly

-> A few remnants of the original template are present at the top of the page, so deleting those would help!

-> Introduction should have a citation

-> Visible code at beginning of second paragraph of second section (looks like " < p > ") should be removed.

-> Some of your sources aren't hyperlinked, so that would be helpful to add (Besser et al, 2012 in the 3rd section, several sources in the 2nd section, etc). The citations are present but don't link to the references.

-> Consider adding a picture of E. Coli itself in the section where you describe its physical characteristics.

-> Size/format of section headings varies a bit, so it might help streamline your page if you make them similar in font size.

-> Nice job overall! You have absolutely tons of references, and you make great use of them!

Comments by: A. Pearlman