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I bumped into a couple of grammar/spelling errors that I'm sure you'll catch when you read it through again and of course reference to the figures in the text would be helpful, along with the hyper-linked references(I have yet to do this for my page too, so I know you were probably going to get to this anyways). Even without these minor corrections, I was happy to read your work and found it very amusing. You have a great way with words and a knack for conveying important information in such simple, effective, and entertaining terms. Great job connecting it to the "larger picture" too, it was already amazing without the last section and then the last couple of paragraphs really brought it all together.  
I bumped into a couple of grammar/spelling errors that I'm sure you'll catch when you read it through again and of course reference to the figures in the text would be helpful, along with the hyper-linked references(I have yet to do this for my page too, so I know you were probably going to get to this anyways). Even without these minor corrections, I was happy to read your work and found it very amusing. You have a great way with words and a knack for conveying important information in such simple, effective, and entertaining terms. Great job connecting it to the "larger picture" too, it was already amazing without the last section and then the last couple of paragraphs really brought it all together. -Damaris Garduno
-Damaris Garduno

Revision as of 01:14, 1 May 2014

I bumped into a couple of grammar/spelling errors that I'm sure you'll catch when you read it through again and of course reference to the figures in the text would be helpful, along with the hyper-linked references(I have yet to do this for my page too, so I know you were probably going to get to this anyways). Even without these minor corrections, I was happy to read your work and found it very amusing. You have a great way with words and a knack for conveying important information in such simple, effective, and entertaining terms. Great job connecting it to the "larger picture" too, it was already amazing without the last section and then the last couple of paragraphs really brought it all together. -Damaris Garduno