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Hi Owen,
Hi Owen,


I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO<sub>2</sub>!  
I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO<sub>2</sub>! Thanks!


-Thanks!
-Rhea Le
 
 
This was very well written.  The quote in the beginning of the page demonstrates your passion for your topic and your passion can be seen in your writing.  I could tell that you invested a lot into writing this page.  The page was easy to read and very interesting.  There a few grammatical errors that need to be corrected.  Also, you should wrap up your work in a conclusion.  It would help tie your points together.  Good job! -Issam Hamdallah

Latest revision as of 05:46, 3 May 2014

Hi Owen,

I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO2! Thanks!

-Rhea Le


This was very well written. The quote in the beginning of the page demonstrates your passion for your topic and your passion can be seen in your writing. I could tell that you invested a lot into writing this page. The page was easy to read and very interesting. There a few grammatical errors that need to be corrected. Also, you should wrap up your work in a conclusion. It would help tie your points together. Good job! -Issam Hamdallah