Difference between revisions of "Talk:Shewanella oneidensis MR-1: Background and Applications"

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Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed).  Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!
 
Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed).  Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!
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This was really interesting and well written. I learned a lot from reading it! I did catch some small edits that you need to do.
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Shewanella needs to be capitalized and italicized in the following areas:
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-Last sentence of "Model Species..." section
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-In the first paragraph of the "Mechanism of Action..." section, in the second sentence
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-Figure 14 caption
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-Figure 15 caption
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-Figure 16 caption
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 3rd sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 5th sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 6th sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 7th sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 8th sentence
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-"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd paragraph

Latest revision as of 02:44, 7 May 2011

Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed). Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!


This was really interesting and well written. I learned a lot from reading it! I did catch some small edits that you need to do.

Shewanella needs to be capitalized and italicized in the following areas: -Last sentence of "Model Species..." section -In the first paragraph of the "Mechanism of Action..." section, in the second sentence -Figure 14 caption -Figure 15 caption -Figure 16 caption -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 3rd sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 5th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 6th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 7th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 8th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd paragraph