Talk:Shewanella oneidensis MR-1: Background and Applications
Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed). Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!