Talk:Symbiotic relationship between Aliivibrio fischeri and Euprymna scolopes

I enjoyed reading your page and I like how you didn't add unnecessary words and you just wrote straight to the point you were trying to make. That being said, however, I feel like you could try and draw out the symbiotic relationship a little more (although perhaps the reason I felt that you should do this is because your sections are a little disorganized). I feel like you could combine those middle sections about symbiosis into one and then make paragraphs because the formatting threw me off a little bit. Besides the general formatting I really liked your page and you obviously went very in depth for some of your topics. -Charlotte Leblang