Talk:The sociality of Myxococcus xanthus: Evidence of social group formation and interactive intelligence: Difference between revisions
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I thought your page was great! I think the inclusion of the Perez research (2014) was a great addition to your page. I also liked the section where you discussed the benefits/drawbacks of the temporary social caste system. It may be beneficial to add a conclusion to your page that sums up the most important points that you are trying to get across to your audience. It would allow the reader to piece together everything they just read. Overall, it was a very good page. -Toni Miller | I thought your page was great! I think the inclusion of the Perez research (2014) was a great addition to your page. I also liked the section where you discussed the benefits/drawbacks of the temporary social caste system. It may be beneficial to add a conclusion to your page that sums up the most important points that you are trying to get across to your audience. It would allow the reader to piece together everything they just read. Overall, it was a very good page. -Toni Miller | ||
Damaris, very cool topic. Your figures and literature are well chosen representations of M. xanthus behavior. I found it particularly interesting how their behavior changes in response to specific stimuli. You also do a good job depicting the pros and cons of a caste system. Your layout is also well done. - Ben Hayden | |||
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I thought your page was great! I think the inclusion of the Perez research (2014) was a great addition to your page. I also liked the section where you discussed the benefits/drawbacks of the temporary social caste system. It may be beneficial to add a conclusion to your page that sums up the most important points that you are trying to get across to your audience. It would allow the reader to piece together everything they just read. Overall, it was a very good page. -Toni Miller
Damaris, very cool topic. Your figures and literature are well chosen representations of M. xanthus behavior. I found it particularly interesting how their behavior changes in response to specific stimuli. You also do a good job depicting the pros and cons of a caste system. Your layout is also well done. - Ben Hayden
