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Overall, your project is very detailed and easy to follow! I thought this was a very interesting topic; I did not realize olive knot disease was such a widespread problem, or one that would is directly affecting economic value of olives and olive oil. Just a few things: I think it would be good to have all of your references numbered, that way you can refer to them as numbers in your txt as opposed to directly citing the study each time. Also, it would be great if a few more pictures could be added: perhaps some for the last few sections? Lastly, be sure to include a conclusion to tie everything together, and link the papers in your references. -Nicole Valentini
Overall, your project is very detailed and easy to follow! I thought this was a very interesting topic; I did not realize olive knot disease was such a widespread problem, or one that would is directly affecting economic value of olives and olive oil. Just a few things: I think it would be good to have all of your references numbered, that way you can refer to them as numbers in your txt as opposed to directly citing the study each time. Also, it would be great if a few more pictures could be added: perhaps some for the last few sections? Lastly, be sure to include a conclusion to tie everything together, and link the papers in your references. -Nicole Valentini
This is a well organized article about the important but often neglected subject of plant diseases. The sections describing plant defenses against Pseudomonas savastonoi and the bacteria's means of evading these defenses is particularly well done. Consider including information about the metabolism of Pseudomonas savastonoi. Good Job! --Hunter Gervelis

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Overall, your project is very detailed and easy to follow! I thought this was a very interesting topic; I did not realize olive knot disease was such a widespread problem, or one that would is directly affecting economic value of olives and olive oil. Just a few things: I think it would be good to have all of your references numbered, that way you can refer to them as numbers in your txt as opposed to directly citing the study each time. Also, it would be great if a few more pictures could be added: perhaps some for the last few sections? Lastly, be sure to include a conclusion to tie everything together, and link the papers in your references. -Nicole Valentini

This is a well organized article about the important but often neglected subject of plant diseases. The sections describing plant defenses against Pseudomonas savastonoi and the bacteria's means of evading these defenses is particularly well done. Consider including information about the metabolism of Pseudomonas savastonoi. Good Job! --Hunter Gervelis