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Hi Blake. | |||
I found your topic super fascinating. Your page is really informative and the figures are really relevant to your paper, especially the first one about the shape of the bacteria. My suggestion is to reformat the paragraph about the adaptation to an animal host. It's pretty long. You could make a new section about the specific gene because it doesn't seem to really fit into the section. You could also maybe add a bit more to the section about the black plague just because it was a horrible epidemic. Maybe add a little more about the actual economic and culture shifts in Europe? | |||
Good work! | |||
-Kevin | |||
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Hi Blake.
I found your topic super fascinating. Your page is really informative and the figures are really relevant to your paper, especially the first one about the shape of the bacteria. My suggestion is to reformat the paragraph about the adaptation to an animal host. It's pretty long. You could make a new section about the specific gene because it doesn't seem to really fit into the section. You could also maybe add a bit more to the section about the black plague just because it was a horrible epidemic. Maybe add a little more about the actual economic and culture shifts in Europe?
Good work!
-Kevin
