Talk:The Threat of Airborne Transmission of Influenza A: H5N1
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The introduction to this paper is strong and concise as it draws the reader in with interesting facts, and prepares the reader for what is to come. However, it may be beneficial to the paper to spend a little more time focusing on the biology of the transmission of the virus later in the paper. A figure illustrating the different transmission mechanisms would be nice. The current research was a great way to end the paper. It leaves the reader interested to learn more about this topic. Great work! -Ariel Bartholomew
