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==Introduction==
Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed). Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!
[[Image:PHIL_1181_lores.jpg|thumb|300px|right|<b>Figure 1. Shewanella onedensis MR-1 growing on hematite</b>. Shewanella are gram-negative, proteobacteria that are facultative anaerobes and can respire on a tremendous variety of inorganic and organic electron acceptors. One such electron acceptor is Fe2O3, which is commonly found in the clay hematite. (Photo from Oak Ridge National Laboratory; http://www.ornl.gov/info/ornlreview/v37_3_04/article02.shtml).]]


==Section 1==
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==Section 2==
<br>Include some current research in each topic, with at least one figure showing data.<br>


==Section 3==
This was really interesting and well written. I learned a lot from reading it! I did catch some small edits that you need to do.  
<br>Include some current research in each topic, with at least one figure showing data.<br>


==Conclusion==
Shewanella needs to be capitalized and italicized in the following areas:
<br>Overall paper length should be 3,000 words, with at least 3 figures.<br>
-Last sentence of "Model Species..." section
 
-In the first paragraph of the "Mechanism of Action..." section, in the second sentence
==References==
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[Sample reference] [http://ijs.sgmjournals.org/cgi/reprint/50/2/489 Takai, K., Sugai, A., Itoh, T., and Horikoshi, K. "''Palaeococcus ferrophilus'' gen. nov., sp. nov., a barophilic, hyperthermophilic archaeon from a deep-sea hydrothermal vent chimney". ''International Journal of Systematic and Evolutionary Microbiology''. 2000. Volume 50. p. 489-500.]
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Latest revision as of 02:44, 7 May 2011

Great topic!!! I thought your topic was very organized and easy to transition to the next section!! Maybe you could change the wording of your first sentence under Transfer of Electrons. I thought it was awkward the way you worded this sentence (Once the biofilm adhering the microbe to the metal is formed). Nice use of figures! Overall, your topic was very thorough and interesting! Good luck!


This was really interesting and well written. I learned a lot from reading it! I did catch some small edits that you need to do.

Shewanella needs to be capitalized and italicized in the following areas: -Last sentence of "Model Species..." section -In the first paragraph of the "Mechanism of Action..." section, in the second sentence -Figure 14 caption -Figure 15 caption -Figure 16 caption -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 3rd sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 5th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 6th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 7th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 8th sentence -"Using Shewanella hydrocarbons" section, 2nd paragraph

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