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Well, Jimmy, one thing that does need to change is that you should superscript your in text citations. I do think this is a great article so far though, with lots of practical/relevant information. Adding a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make the information more accessible. Another thing I might change is the heading "M. Hominis in Modern Day Culture" to something along the lines of "Recent Studies", just because the word "Culture" is misleading in this context. Other than that, I think it looks good! | Well, Jimmy, one thing that does need to change is that you should superscript your in text citations. I do think this is a great article so far though, with lots of practical/relevant information. Adding a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make the information more accessible. Another thing I might change is the heading "M. Hominis in Modern Day Culture" to something along the lines of "Recent Studies", just because the word "Culture" is misleading in this context. Other than that, I think it looks good! | ||
I think you did very well on this Jimmy you provided a lot of useful practical information. I agree that a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make more effective, but other than that great job! | I think you did very well on this Jimmy you provided a lot of useful practical information. I agree that a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make more effective, but other than that great job! Kyle | ||
Latest revision as of 21:44, 8 May 2013
Well, Jimmy, one thing that does need to change is that you should superscript your in text citations. I do think this is a great article so far though, with lots of practical/relevant information. Adding a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make the information more accessible. Another thing I might change is the heading "M. Hominis in Modern Day Culture" to something along the lines of "Recent Studies", just because the word "Culture" is misleading in this context. Other than that, I think it looks good!
I think you did very well on this Jimmy you provided a lot of useful practical information. I agree that a diagram or two in the metabolism section might make more effective, but other than that great job! Kyle
