Talk:Aliivibrio Fischeri and the Role of Quorum Sensing: Difference between revisions
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3. Also, make sure the URLs under your figures are all hyperlinked. <br> | 3. Also, make sure the URLs under your figures are all hyperlinked. <br> | ||
Otherwise this wiki page was really interesting and I liked your choice of figures. | Otherwise this wiki page was really interesting and I liked your choice of figures. | ||
I agree with the above comment about adding more about the discovery of your microbe, even if it is just a brief paragraph. You briefly mention in the conclusion future studies for scientists, maybe include an actual study? | |||
LOoks good! -Kevin |
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Overall this page is really well done! I only have a few suggestions:
1. Make sure to italicize your microbe's name. To do this, add a "< i >" and a "< /i >" (without the spaces between the < and the i) before and after the word you are italicizing. In your case it would look like < i >Aliivibrio fischeri< /i>.
2. Maybe add more background about the discovery of your microbe if you think it will fit? I don't think this is completely necessary for your article but it might add something for the reader.
3. Also, make sure the URLs under your figures are all hyperlinked.
Otherwise this wiki page was really interesting and I liked your choice of figures.
I agree with the above comment about adding more about the discovery of your microbe, even if it is just a brief paragraph. You briefly mention in the conclusion future studies for scientists, maybe include an actual study?
LOoks good! -Kevin