Talk:Aliivibrio Fischeri and the Role of Quorum Sensing

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Overall this page is really well done! I only have a few suggestions:
1. Make sure to italicize your microbe's name. To do this, add a "< i >" and a "< /i >" (without the spaces between the < and the i) before and after the word you are italicizing. In your case it would look like < i >Aliivibrio fischeri< /i>.
2. Maybe add more background about the discovery of your microbe if you think it will fit? I don't think this is completely necessary for your article but it might add something for the reader.
3. Also, make sure the URLs under your figures are all hyperlinked.
Otherwise this wiki page was really interesting and I liked your choice of figures.


I agree with the above comment about adding more about the discovery of your microbe, even if it is just a brief paragraph. You briefly mention in the conclusion future studies for scientists, maybe include an actual study?

LOoks good! -Kevin

Hi Elizabeth, I would also suggest Italicizing the names of the bacteria. Other than that, I thought this was an extremely well-written review, and I enjoyed learning more about quorum sensing, as my topic deals with the boundaries of multicellularity as well. -Danny