Talk:Bacillus thuringiensis toxin in C. elegans

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Great job, Sarah! I thought you did a nice job of tackling particularly difficult material with perceived ease and confidence. Your writing style is impressive, and it makes the article easy to read. I also liked how well you flowed from each section of the article so that there is a clear thread through the material. My only suggestion is that you include a figure that shows the appearance and/or structure of the Bacillus bacteria because it would be interesting to reference and help the audience visualize your points. -Mary Frazier Greene