Talk:Herpes Simplex Virus Immune Response and Uncharacteristic Roles in Other Diseases: Difference between revisions
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Bell's Palsy is introduced as an uncharacteristic disease at the end of the introduction is it possible more specifics of that interaction | Bell's Palsy is introduced as an uncharacteristic disease at the end of the introduction is it possible for more specifics of that interaction to be discussed? | ||
"they continue to shed HSV at all times" | "they continue to shed HSV at all times" | ||
-this is horrible news. | -this is horrible news. | ||
Revision as of 18:53, 2 May 2016
Viral Description Comments
-Full titles of HSV are used in the beginning of this section, I am not sure if this is necessary.
HSV Vaccine Comments
"though these vaccine trials sometimes go awry due to viruses that are not attenuated well or that produce local reactions and adverse systemic side effect"
-It would be extremely interesting to hear more about attenuation and the specific problems, awry is vague here.
"A vaccine effective in resulting in sterilizing immunity would have far reaching consequences beyond typical clinical presentations of genital herpes and their associated social troubles."
- This sentence could be revised
General Comments
Bell's Palsy is introduced as an uncharacteristic disease at the end of the introduction is it possible for more specifics of that interaction to be discussed?
"they continue to shed HSV at all times"
-this is horrible news.
