Talk:Bacterial nucleation in pseudomonas syringae
I liked your microbewiki page, I thought the overall topic and the flow of the presentation was great. Are there more current research that you could describe? Are there other bacteria that can perform features similar to pseudomonas syringae?
-Figure 3 had a large black background that you could crop out and then re-upload the picture, similarly there is an extra gray area in Image 3.
-Create hyperlinks for your references and you could like those to the reference numbers you after the sentences.
-When you refer to the images in text you call them pictures, I would chose on or the other instead of switching back and forth.