Talk:Microbial Biofuel Mechanisms and Diversity

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Hi Owen,

I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO2! Thanks!

-Rhea Le

This was very well written. The quote in the beginning of the page demonstrates your passion for your topic and your passion can be seen in your writing. I could tell that you invested a lot into writing this page. The page was easy to read and very interesting. There a few grammatical errors that need to be corrected. Also, you should wrap up your work in a conclusion. It would help tie your points together. Good job! -Issam Hamdallah