Talk:Microbial Biofuel Mechanisms and Diversity
I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO2! Thanks!
This was very well written. The quote in the beginning of the page demonstrates your passion for your topic and your passion can be seen in your writing. I could tell that you invested a lot into writing this page. The page was easy to read and very interesting. There a few grammatical errors that need to be corrected. Also, you should wrap up your work in a conclusion. It would help tie your points together. Good job! -Issam Hamdallah