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This page looks very nice. I learned a lot about the type of toxins produced by strains of C. perfringens. If I were to make suggestions on your page, they would be very few. I think it needs a good read over in terms of grammar. The sentence structure within some parts is a bit odd, I would look at that. I also think a bit more information about each of the toxins would be great! Your section on human application was good. Add hyperlinks to your references. -Andrew Parmelee | This page looks very nice. I learned a lot about the type of toxins produced by strains of C. perfringens. If I were to make suggestions on your page, they would be very few. I think it needs a good read over in terms of grammar. The sentence structure within some parts is a bit odd, I would look at that. I also think a bit more information about each of the toxins would be great! Your section on human application was good. Add hyperlinks to your references. -Andrew Parmelee | ||
Hi Victor, | |||
Overall, you did a nice job on your page. You provided a lot of great information about Clostridium perfringen and the infections it causes. I really enjoyed you section about food poisoning and I learned a lot. The figures that you provided are helpful and your page is very well organized. There are a few areas that need to be proofread, but other then that you page looks good. | |||
Michelle P | |||
Revision as of 15:42, 2 May 2014
Victor, This page looks very nice. I learned a lot about the type of toxins produced by strains of C. perfringens. If I were to make suggestions on your page, they would be very few. I think it needs a good read over in terms of grammar. The sentence structure within some parts is a bit odd, I would look at that. I also think a bit more information about each of the toxins would be great! Your section on human application was good. Add hyperlinks to your references. -Andrew Parmelee
Hi Victor,
Overall, you did a nice job on your page. You provided a lot of great information about Clostridium perfringen and the infections it causes. I really enjoyed you section about food poisoning and I learned a lot. The figures that you provided are helpful and your page is very well organized. There are a few areas that need to be proofread, but other then that you page looks good.
Michelle P
