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I am very impressed with your page. I like that you are doing your | I am very impressed with your page. I like that you are doing your project on an unconventional topic in microbiology. This page is very detailed and well organized. One thing I would improve is the increasing the amount of detail in your first 3 figures. They are very similar, and at first glance I have a hard time telling them apart. I think you should give more explanation in them to highlight the differences. You can even take it a step further talk about how the differences effect the cell's overall function in these captions. I think once this is completely finished it will be one of the best pages in the class. | ||
--Deveren Manley II | --Deveren Manley II | ||
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I am very impressed with your page. I like that you are doing your project on an unconventional topic in microbiology. This page is very detailed and well organized. One thing I would improve is the increasing the amount of detail in your first 3 figures. They are very similar, and at first glance I have a hard time telling them apart. I think you should give more explanation in them to highlight the differences. You can even take it a step further talk about how the differences effect the cell's overall function in these captions. I think once this is completely finished it will be one of the best pages in the class.
--Deveren Manley II
