Talk:Membrane proteins as mechanisms of immune system evasion in Trypanosoma brucei
I was very impressed with your page. You presented complex information in a very clear, accessible, and understandable way. Your work was thorough and traveled in a nice, logical, and easy to follow progression.
A few suggestions you can choose to incorporate. As I was reading I thought about a few things I would like to know more about. Have there been any documented cases of resistance to sleeping sickness? Also, the paper you presented about rearranging the surface proteins was fascinating. I think it you went a little more in-depth into that section it could be helpful. Is there any diagram for the genome rearranging that you would be able to include? Furthermore, I think it would be useful if you added just a couple sentences about the cultural implications sleeping sickness has in different African populations. It might help to better understand the big picture. Last, I think I noticed one error, “The inadequacy of current treatments has spurred on research by associations like the World Health Organization (WHO),” so just give it a quick read-through. Overall though, a really comprehensive and fascinating page!