Talk:A novel strain of avian origin influenza A (H7N9)

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Very interesting page, Jack! I enjoyed reading about a topic that oftentimes receives a breadth of coverage instead of depth of detail in media. Your page had clear organizational progression, which made it easy to read. I found the statement about possible intermediate hosts (Liu et al) under the "Origins" section intriguing. It would be interesting to study viral evolution relating to host organisms. The only changes I would suggest are a few technical changes, one example at the very end of the section "Avian flu comparison" is the cutoff citation. For citations of complete articles at the end of the page, I would recommend using initials for author names after the last name and excluding the first author. Overall nice work! --Liz Eder