Talk:Alcaligenes Eutrophus and Its Role in Biodegradable Polymer Production

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This is an interesting subject; the general concept of using biological processes to perform industrial jobs is very appealing, since most biological production processes are far more efficient than many current abiotic procedures. As always, pay attention to the little things: italicizing species names, correct spelling, etc., and do try reading straight through it once or twice to understand the flow of the argument and make sure it's what you want. The only section that needs a good deal of work are the two “Environmentally vs. Economically Friendly” sections. For one, they should probably be merged, and make them more cohesive. Make sure to cite all your facts, and integrate figures into your text such that they directly support your argument; right now they're just sort of eye candy. Lastly, write a good conclusion for the article as a whole. A good closing theme would be something about how this option for polymer production is being currently implemented. Otherwise, a good article!