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I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO<sub>2</sub>! Thanks! | I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO<sub>2</sub>! Thanks! | ||
-Rhea Le | -Rhea Le | ||
Revision as of 05:14, 3 May 2014
Hi Owen,
I think your paper was really great! I liked that you included the quote at the beginning, I thought that it was a nice touch. Overall, I thought that your paper was very easy to read and comprehend. I could really see your own writing in this paper because it seems like everything was said in your own words, which is not easy to do. I think it would be good to include a conclusion or wrap-up, possibly about future work and or the most sustainable form of biofuel. And don't forget to fix subscripts such as CO2 to CO2! Thanks!
-Rhea Le
