Talk:Nanotubes facilitate intercellular signaling in eukaryotic and prokaryotic cells: Difference between revisions
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Overall I think that this page was very well written and very interesting. You started with a solid introduction and all of your other sections are well organized and flow easily between each other. I liked how you were able to talk about nanotubes in a number of different contexts--its role in pathogenesis, but also gene transfer, and mutualism. I found your section on HIV and HTLV particularly interesting after learning about how pathogens can evade the immune system in the last few weeks. I would suggest explaining a bit more about CAD cells and what they are in the prion section. | Overall I think that this page was very well written and very interesting. You started with a solid introduction and all of your other sections are well organized and flow easily between each other. I liked how you were able to talk about nanotubes in a number of different contexts--its role in pathogenesis, but also gene transfer, and mutualism. I found your section on HIV and HTLV particularly interesting after learning about how pathogens can evade the immune system in the last few weeks. I would suggest explaining a bit more about CAD cells and what they are in the prion section. | ||
Very well written and well researched paper. It is hard for me to give constructive criticism as I find it hard to think of ways for you to improve the page. The only thing I can say is that I think it would be great to have some kind of visual aid for the structure section if possible. | |||
Also, in the Formation section, you start off by writing "Contrarily, nanotubes are inhibited by chemical fixation, mechanical stress, and prolonged light exposure, making these structures intricately difficult to study". I suggest that you do not reference anything from former sections as every section should be able to stand on its own. | |||
Really good job though and all the best of luck - Jon | |||
Latest revision as of 00:07, 8 May 2015
Overall I think that this page was very well written and very interesting. You started with a solid introduction and all of your other sections are well organized and flow easily between each other. I liked how you were able to talk about nanotubes in a number of different contexts--its role in pathogenesis, but also gene transfer, and mutualism. I found your section on HIV and HTLV particularly interesting after learning about how pathogens can evade the immune system in the last few weeks. I would suggest explaining a bit more about CAD cells and what they are in the prion section.
Very well written and well researched paper. It is hard for me to give constructive criticism as I find it hard to think of ways for you to improve the page. The only thing I can say is that I think it would be great to have some kind of visual aid for the structure section if possible.
Also, in the Formation section, you start off by writing "Contrarily, nanotubes are inhibited by chemical fixation, mechanical stress, and prolonged light exposure, making these structures intricately difficult to study". I suggest that you do not reference anything from former sections as every section should be able to stand on its own.
Really good job though and all the best of luck - Jon
