Talk:Pseudomonas Aeruginosa Infection and Biofilm Production in Immunocompromised Individuals

I would try to edit the template so that you have an Introduction heading and the menu at the top to be able to jump to certain sections of the paper. Also make sure Pseudomonas aeruginosa and P. aeruginosa are always italicized. The pictures should have a actual link within the caption to take the reader directly to wherever you got them from. I really enjoyed the introduction - the characteristics of the species was well explained, so good job! As you continue in the paper, I would make sure you’re not repeating yourself too much. Sometimes I think it is ok to reiterate something if you are going to expand on it, but if you just state the same thing again it gets repetitive. When you say that the human lungs are hostile and thus biofilms protect the bacteria colonizing there you may want to explain why. What are the microbes being protected from in the lungs that would otherwise kill them without the formation of a biofilm? It also might be beneficial to wrap up the paper with a short conclusion, but overall good job! [-andersonam]