Talk:Symbiotic Microorganismal Toxin Production in Pufferfish

Your page looks great! I thought it was really interesting. Overall, I think you did an awesome job! I only have two suggestions. Some of the sentences were a bit wordy, and could likely be broken up into multiple sentences to make it easier to digest. Also, there were a few different times where you cited the same thing multiple times in one paragraph. For instance, one paragraph contains three different [2] citations, even though nothing else was cited in between. Usually if I have a paragraph or two that all came from the same source, I just cite it once at the end of the paragraph. I only cite it multiple times if that paragraph contains another citation in the middle of it. This may totally be a personal preference though, so feel free to ignore that. Great job! - Lauren Michael