Talk:Yellow Fever Vaccine

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Really interesting page, Kei. You have a lot of information and it's very well organized. My only suggestions would be to do some proof reading/rewording and reformat a bit. For example your sentence: "An interesting observation that has been observed in studying the midzonal hepatocytes is that the much of the cell death in the area are attributed to apoptosis rather than lytic necrosis of the tissue," gets a little muddy.Also, there are a few places where you didn't italicize specie's names and your figures could fit into your sections a little better. That really isn't a big deal, I just think it would make your page a little prettier. - Alex Gonzales