Talk:Clostridium botulinum Neurotoxins

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This is a really interesting topic. For improvement, I would recommend fixing the pictures first. I really like the discussion about neurotoxins and how their production relates to human disease, food borne illnesses etc. I wish there had been some more primary literature about current research and some primary figures or graphs. Maybe you could talk about a couple specific experiments that have been undertaken recently and their results (more specifics). Then talk about the direction of future research. Also, maybe a little more about the history of the pathogen and how treatment methods have changed over time. There were also gramatical error and some awkward phrasing that could be fixed with some more editing time. But overall great topic and very interesting to read about!