Difference between revisions of "Talk:Helicobacter pylori as a causative agent of Gastric Cancer"

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-Would it be possible to get a larger version of Figure 5: kind-of hard to read.
 
-Would it be possible to get a larger version of Figure 5: kind-of hard to read.
 
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Great page, I enjoyed reading through it, a few suggestions that I would have would be to consider making the numbers for your sources in text into superscripts, this makes them stand out less without making them hard to find. It also appears that you are missing sources in your reference page, near the end of the text you have [17] and [18] listed as references but those numbers are absent from your references section. Otherwise, things seem pretty good.
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-Mark Boniface

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-In the intro you mention that urease creates an acidic environment but then later on says that it decreases acid: maybe make more clear. -You could go into some more detail about the acid resistance of H. pylori and maybe talk more about the type IV excretion system. -Would it be possible to get a larger version of Figure 5: kind-of hard to read. -Stephanie


Great page, I enjoyed reading through it, a few suggestions that I would have would be to consider making the numbers for your sources in text into superscripts, this makes them stand out less without making them hard to find. It also appears that you are missing sources in your reference page, near the end of the text you have [17] and [18] listed as references but those numbers are absent from your references section. Otherwise, things seem pretty good. -Mark Boniface